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عبداللطيف أحمد فؤاد 30-07-2011 01:38 AM

The Golden love
 

I am the world story
I am the universe glory
As I produce golden poetry
To kings to prophets and to peoples
Oh ladies oh flowers
Oh cities, oh caves and palaces
My heart has gardens of Romance
My fingers have rivers of peace
Oh my love oh my woman
I plant seeds of beauty
In the hearts of the seas
I harvest crops of piety
With my fantastic love
With my sugar lady
She gives my life
She takes my life
She deserves every thing
Her love makes me a king
She is you
All roses congratulate me
All the people follow me
To be kings with their love
To be happy with their love
Abdellatif Ahmed Fouad
Egypt

zubayer 03-08-2011 07:07 AM

NOT Bad.
 
:New2:

Brother Abdellatif Ahmed Fouad

NOT Bad.

But there is something pop in your golden love , said “All the people follow me , To be kings with their love”..

I don’t think so, you’re totally WRONG ..

Nobody follow you to be a king or even queen w/his-her

love, unless they’re unwise…!

Very nice try :thumb:






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